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	<title>Comments on: Free Edit of your novel&#039;s HOOK</title>
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		<title>By: gotheca</title>
		<link>http://victoriamixon.com/2009/08/08/free-edit-of-your-novels-hook/comment-page-1/#comment-347</link>
		<dc:creator>gotheca</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 03:47:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lady Glamis, I stuck a little elaboration in the announcement to help clarify it. A hook can be as long as you think your reader will tolerate, but I wouldn&#039;t count on too long. They&#039;ve got notoriously short attention spans.

For this reason---and because I only have so many hours in the day---I&#039;m asking folks to limit the hook they submit to a paragraph or around 150 words.

I look forward to reading yours!

Victoria</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lady Glamis, I stuck a little elaboration in the announcement to help clarify it. A hook can be as long as you think your reader will tolerate, but I wouldn&#8217;t count on too long. They&#8217;ve got notoriously short attention spans.</p>
<p>For this reason&#8212;and because I only have so many hours in the day&#8212;I&#8217;m asking folks to limit the hook they submit to a paragraph or around 150 words.</p>
<p>I look forward to reading yours!</p>
<p>Victoria</p>
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		<title>By: Lady Glamis</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lady Glamis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 02:54:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is a fantastic offer! I&#039;m curious, though, can you be specific by what you mean by hook? I might have missed an earlier post on this, so I&#039;ll go check. Because there&#039;s loglines. I have one of those. Is a &quot;hook&quot; supposed to be longer?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a fantastic offer! I&#8217;m curious, though, can you be specific by what you mean by hook? I might have missed an earlier post on this, so I&#8217;ll go check. Because there&#8217;s loglines. I have one of those. Is a &#8220;hook&#8221; supposed to be longer?</p>
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