Comments on: Free HOOK Edit: Bethany is stalking me— http://victoriamixon.com/2009/08/24/bethany-is-stalking-me/ Tue, 15 May 2012 19:24:37 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Lisa Katzenberger http://victoriamixon.com/2009/08/24/bethany-is-stalking-me/comment-page-1/#comment-573 Lisa Katzenberger Thu, 27 Aug 2009 15:41:44 +0000 http://victoriamixon.com/?p=2241#comment-573 Thanks Victoria, this is very helpful! I'm on the third draft of this novel and still struggling with how to launch this first scene, where Sadie finds out her job is in jeopardy. You've given me a lot to think about! Thanks Victoria, this is very helpful! I’m on the third draft of this novel and still struggling with how to launch this first scene, where Sadie finds out her job is in jeopardy. You’ve given me a lot to think about!

]]> By: Lady Glamis http://victoriamixon.com/2009/08/24/bethany-is-stalking-me/comment-page-1/#comment-572 Lady Glamis Tue, 25 Aug 2009 14:42:47 +0000 http://victoriamixon.com/?p=2241#comment-572 This does feel like a romance to me as well. I love the imagery and the setup you have started. I'd keep reading to find out about all the secrets! This does feel like a romance to me as well. I love the imagery and the setup you have started. I’d keep reading to find out about all the secrets!

]]> By: Amy http://victoriamixon.com/2009/08/24/bethany-is-stalking-me/comment-page-1/#comment-569 Amy Mon, 24 Aug 2009 22:27:23 +0000 http://victoriamixon.com/?p=2241#comment-569 I know, it's weird but I can totally picture Bethany and her anxiousness to spill the beans....someone who says not to tell is always great for a juicy secret! This one makes me really curious, especially since Sadie apparently doesn't like Jack. I know, it’s weird but I can totally picture Bethany and her anxiousness to spill the beans….someone who says not to tell is always great for a juicy secret! This one makes me really curious, especially since Sadie apparently doesn’t like Jack.

]]> By: gotheca http://victoriamixon.com/2009/08/24/bethany-is-stalking-me/comment-page-1/#comment-571 gotheca Mon, 24 Aug 2009 22:20:43 +0000 http://victoriamixon.com/?p=2241#comment-571 Bethany's great, isn't she? I love how she goes from sauntering to being on the narrator's desk the instant she hangs up. This woman means business! Vcitoria Bethany’s great, isn’t she? I love how she goes from sauntering to being on the narrator’s desk the instant she hangs up. This woman means business!

Vcitoria

]]> By: Jordan McCollum http://victoriamixon.com/2009/08/24/bethany-is-stalking-me/comment-page-1/#comment-570 Jordan McCollum Mon, 24 Aug 2009 20:35:37 +0000 http://victoriamixon.com/?p=2241#comment-570 I love the imagery for Bethany! We're not bombarded with her height/weight/eye color/hair color—we don't even get the color of her shoes—but I can still picture her. I love the imagery for Bethany! We’re not bombarded with her height/weight/eye color/hair color—we don’t even get the color of her shoes—but I can still picture her.

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