Free HOOK Edit: In the morning when there was nothing but birdsong—
by Mindy Peterman

We’re doing #3 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my Editing Services.)

This one is called In the morning when there was nothing but birdsong, by Mindy Peterman