Comments on: 2009 August Free Edit HOOKS http://victoriamixon.com Sat, 04 Feb 2012 03:18:51 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: gotheca http://victoriamixon.com/free-edit-hooks/comment-page-1/#comment-445 gotheca Tue, 01 Sep 2009 20:08:39 +0000 http://victoriamixon.com/?page_id=2098#comment-445 You can see Sean O'Mordha's novel hook in the final week's free edits. Victoria You can see Sean O’Mordha’s novel hook in the final week’s free edits.

Victoria

]]> By: Sean O'Mordha http://victoriamixon.com/free-edit-hooks/comment-page-1/#comment-444 Sean O'Mordha Fri, 28 Aug 2009 22:59:12 +0000 http://victoriamixon.com/?page_id=2098#comment-444 The uninhabited island lay thirty meters to port, and somewhere beyond the white sand beach an ambush. In the star-filled blackness of night neither were visible to the man standing alone on the bow of the ship, but the sound of the waves rolling across the wide, shallow reef placed the island, and the Captain had warned of Fuentes' presence. Unfortunately, both were more apparent than the family's destiny the old woman on Haiti had seen when she threw the bones. The uninhabited island lay thirty meters to port, and somewhere beyond the white sand beach an ambush. In the star-filled blackness of night neither were visible to the man standing alone on the bow of the ship, but the sound of the waves rolling across the wide, shallow reef placed the island, and the Captain had warned of Fuentes’ presence. Unfortunately, both were more apparent than the family’s destiny the old woman on Haiti had seen when she threw the bones.

]]> By: gotheca http://victoriamixon.com/free-edit-hooks/comment-page-1/#comment-443 gotheca Mon, 24 Aug 2009 22:05:12 +0000 http://victoriamixon.com/?page_id=2098#comment-443 Got it! Thanks, Jeannette. And I'm sorry, Marie! I hope everyone who wants to read it can get to it now. Victoria Got it! Thanks, Jeannette. And I’m sorry, Marie! I hope everyone who wants to read it can get to it now.

Victoria

]]> By: gotheca http://victoriamixon.com/free-edit-hooks/comment-page-1/#comment-442 gotheca Mon, 24 Aug 2009 22:02:47 +0000 http://victoriamixon.com/?page_id=2098#comment-442 How very bizarre. Thanks for letting me know. I'll fix it! Victoria How very bizarre. Thanks for letting me know. I’ll fix it!

Victoria

]]> By: Jeanette Bennett http://victoriamixon.com/free-edit-hooks/comment-page-1/#comment-441 Jeanette Bennett Mon, 24 Aug 2009 21:29:59 +0000 http://victoriamixon.com/?page_id=2098#comment-441 The link to "My guitar case bounced" doesn't work. The link to “My guitar case bounced” doesn’t work.

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