#editingchat 4/28/11

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Thanks, everyone! Ciao! #editingchat
3 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Drop me a line if you want to do another #editingchat. I haven’t made any decisions about continuing past the end of April yet.
3 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
RT @mterrygreen #editingchat Fate of a revolution lies in the hands of a young woman who must choose btwn love & the future of her country.
4 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: You see how deep you can dig before you even write a word. #editingchat \ I do and now’s the time.
4 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
@mterrygreen You’re welcome! You see how deep you can dig before you even write a word. #editingchat
4 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Okay, everyone, this whole chat will be posted on my blog this afternoon for your perusal. #editingchat
5 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: The 2ndary problem I mentioned #editingchat | Oh right! Thanks! And thanks for the developmental edit!
5 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
The 2ndary problem I mentioned was the possibility that Charlie cd threaten Flora’s love for him i.e. make her doubt him #editingchat
6 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@shanearthur: #editingchat Fate of a revolution lies in the hands of a young woman who must choose btwn love and the future of her country.
7 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Now my clock has chimed 1, so we need to wind up. #editingchat
7 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Flora’s story is about Flora’s needs. Yes, Charlie’s choices are layering, but the structure is Flora’s. #editingchat
8 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
That’s your Climax. That’s Flora’s story. #editingchat
9 minutes ago

megcarpen Megan Carpenter
@
@victoriamixon Or she could choose Charlie, but then Charlie chooses something else. #editingchat Maybe he gives up?
9 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
EXACTLY. @mterrygreen #editingchat Saving his life screws up the revolution
9 minutes ago

MarionAltena Marion Altena
@
@VictoriaMixon Is this a chat about development editing? I’m not able to see the entire timeline of the hashtag… #editingchat
10 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: Because the whole pt is that she saves his life. #editingchat | Saving his life screws up the revolution.
10 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
She saves Charlie’s life, right? Her big choice? So what was the other choice that would have gone along w/the revolution? #editingchat
10 minutes ago

shanearthur shanearthur
#editingchat 2 minutes left. What would be our new story sentence? 🙂
11 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
And not just Charlie himself, but Charlie’s life. Because the whole pt is that she saves his life. #editingchat
11 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Remember we’re creating a situation in which to force Flora to choose: Charlie. Or revolution. One or the other. #editingchat
12 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
RT @VictoriaMixon: They can’t read the future. #editingchat | The only person left is Flora and even she can see it’s pointless.
13 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Maybe if they just tried one…more…thing…they’d win. #editingchat
13 minutes ago

megcarpen Megan Carpenter
@
@victoriamixon A cause could end when there’s no longer support for it, when they’ve chosen another cause #editingchat
13 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
We’re talking about characters who act & choose just like real people. They can’t read the future. #editingchat
13 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Charlie’s such a lame-oh. #editingchat forgot it was your day to lead the revolt
14 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Yes, but what’s the decision pt? When do you say, “Guys, we can ask, but there’s no more help coming”?How do you KNOW? #editingchat
15 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: When do you decide your revolution is hopeless & pull the plug? #editingchat \ He forgot it was your day to lead the revolt.
15 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: When do you decide your revolution is hopeless & pull the plug? #editingchat \ No resources, no support.
15 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
When the Brits tell you to? No. When everyone’s dead? No. (Flora lived.) When? #editingchat
16 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
When do you decide your revolution is hopeless & pull the plug? #editingchat
16 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@Daeruin: Charlie can’t marry Flora if he’s on the throne. He needs a princess. #editingchat \ This could be in the back of his mind.
17 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
No, he doesn’t. Charlie’s revolution stopped at some pt & did not proceed. Why? #editingchat
17 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Yes, the revolutionaries cd be choosing b/t Charlie & someone else. #editingchat
18 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
RT @VictoriaMixon: Hint: Scotland is not ruled now by Charlie’s descendants. #editingchat \ Historically, I don’t think he ever returns.
18 minutes ago

Daeruin Benjamin Rose
Charlie can’t marry Flora if he’s on the throne. He needs a princess. #editingchat
18 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Or, I should say, *attempting* to win the revolution? #editingchat
18 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: Is there a way that winning the revolution spells sure doom for Charlie? #editingchat Somebody better than him must succeed.
19 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Hint: Scotland is not ruled now by Charlie’s descendants. #editingchat
20 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Is there a way that winning the revolution spells sure doom for Charlie? #editingchat #yesthereis
21 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Well, she needs to be backed into a corner where she has to choose. Chuck or. . .what? #editingchat #cakeordeath
21 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: So what choice was she up against? #editingchat \ If she doesn’t save Chuck, she can’t have her revolution either.
22 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
We know her Faux Resolution is where she thinks she’d squeaked by w/out having to make a choice. #editingchat
22 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Yeah, it’s there, but I realized we didn’t finish w/her Climax. So first we need to do that: what’s Flora’s choice? #editingchat #sophie
23 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: She needs Charlie. She needs her revolution. #editingchat \ Those are the two biggies.
23 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
And we know she chooses to save Charlie. So what choice was she up against? #editingchat
24 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: So guys, we played a little with another catastrophe. Remember? #editingchat | My scrolling reveals naught.
24 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Flora’s Climax is having to choose, right? One need or the other. She needs Charlie. She needs her revolution. #editingchat
25 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Say hi to Mel for us. #editingchat
25 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: Now you’re just screwing w/poor Flora’s head. @shanearthur #editingchat \ Frankly, I feel like I’ve channeled Mel Gibson.
26 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Now you’re just screwing w/poor Flora’s head. @shanearthur #editingchat
27 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
What did we suggest in passing might really burn Flora’s buns, short of losing both beloved & prince in one fell swoop? #editingchat
27 minutes ago

shanearthur shanearthur
@
@VictoriaMixon Her son becomes a loyalist. #editingchat 😉
28 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
So guys, we played a little with another catastrophe that cd happen to Flora on the way to her worst nightmare. Remember? #editingchat
28 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@shanearthur: @mterrygreen @VictoriaMixon the baby grows up to fight in Am. Rev. #editingchat \ A little bit Braveheart meets The Patriot.
28 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: You can give her a consolation prize, but you don’t have to. #editingchat | She can do without.
29 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Apparently, Flora herself goes off to fight in the American Rev #editingchat
29 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
You can give her a consolation prize, but you don’t have to. #editingchat
29 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
That’s her character. And character creates plot. #editingchat
30 minutes ago

shanearthur shanearthur
@
@mterrygreen @VictoriaMixon the baby grows up to fight in Am. Rev. #editingchat
30 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Do you see how creating Flora’s story around her NEEDS catapults her off the end into what you already know was her future? #editingchat
30 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Who were, it turns out, the engineers of Flora’s greatest nightmare which, even if she overcame it, brought her to grief. #editingchat
31 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@shanearthur: @mterrygreen @VictoriaMixon indeed. Her consolation prize is she’s pregnant with his baby. #editingchat | Nice!
31 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
. . .even matter to her except insofar as it’s against the Brits. #editingchat
32 minutes ago

shanearthur shanearthur
@
@mterrygreen @VictoriaMixon indeed. Her consolation prize is she’s pregnant with his baby. #editingchat
32 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
. . .run away to a really hopeless war going on somewhere else where she can throw her life away on a cause that doesn’t . . . #editingchat
32 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Maybe not happy. Maybe it makes her miserable. Maybe it makes her want to throw her life away. Maybe it makes her want to. . . #editingchat
33 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
For now we’re focused on aiming Flora at her Climax. #editingchat
33 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: It happens. #editingchat she must lose prince | Then her consolation prize better make her pretty dang happy.
34 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
But we’re not going to worry about that Resolution right now. 1st you write the story. THEN you know what you learned from it. #editingchat
34 minutes ago

prettyandi Andi Stenger
@
@mterrygreen ahhh. this is pretty interesting. #editingchat
34 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
And your Resolution is going to be how Flora handles what we happen to know is her inevitable conclusion #editingchat
34 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
So Flora’s story isn’t a total comedy. It happens. #editingchat she must lose prince
35 minutes ago

megcarpen Megan Carpenter
@
@prettyandi @Shelley_Watters We’re doing a developmental demo, @mterrygreen gave us a sentence, and we’re building a story #editingchat
35 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
That tells you what stuff you can safely leave out. #editingchat
35 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: We’ve got Flora aimed at loss of love, loss of prince. #editingchat \ Though I know, historically, she must lose prince.
36 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Everything she does throughout the story is in the service of 1 need or other. We throw her from 1 to the other, a hot potato #editingchat
36 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
That’s our focus. No matter what we do with this story, we’ve got Flora aimed at her nightmare: loss of love, loss of prince. #editingchat
37 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@prettyandi: @Shelley_Watters Editor @VictoriaMixon is helping me develop a historical fiction premise. #editingchat
37 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
So now we know Flora’s 2 needs, & we know where they’re going to collide: when the Prince she wants on the throne is endangered #editingchat
38 minutes ago

prettyandi Andi Stenger
@Shelley_Watters Editor @VictoriaMixon has been doing #editingchat for the past few weeks. I’m reading to see if there’s a topic.
38 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Which we have just done. #editingchat
39 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
And we can really extrapolate both these needs backward from our Climax, which we already know. #editingchat
39 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
RT @VictoriaMixon: She NEEDS her Charlie, plus she NEEDS her political cause. #editingchat | Bingo.
39 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
She NEEDS her Charlie, plus she NEEDS her political cause. #editingchat
39 minutes ago

Shelley_Watters Shelley Watters
@
@prettyandi Ooh – why is it I’m just hearing about #editingchat! Who is running it/whats the topic?
40 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
So Flora, like our protag from last week, is a revolutionary. #editingchat
40 minutes ago

Daeruin Benjamin Rose
@
@VictoriaMixon She needs to make the prince love her back. #editingchat
40 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
RT @VictoriaMixon: Dude on the Run. You just got your title. #editingchat \ Didn’t Paul McCartney do that already?
40 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: Now what’s Flora’s other driving need? #editingchat | To see his cause win out. Her cause too.
41 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Dude on the Run. You just got your title. #editingchat
41 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Now what’s Flora’s other driving need? #editingchat
42 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: We can’t make Charlie *too* stupid. #editingchat | Dude is on the run. He needs help wherever he can get it.
42 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Save a search on #editingchat & you’ll catch up @prettyandi
42 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
We can’t make Charlie *too* stupid or Flora will look like a fool for risking her life for the blighter. #editingchat
43 minutes ago

prettyandi Andi Stenger
I totally forgot about #editingchat ! eek! Is there a topic or just questions?
43 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: So Flora needs Charlie. We assume Charlie also loves her #editingchat \ Possibly not. Yet another obstacle, silly prince.
44 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
And, as @megcarpen & @shanearthur are saying, she also has another equally-powerful need. What is it? #editingchat
44 minutes ago

shanearthur shanearthur
@
@VictoriaMixon Charlie knows he can’t sleep with a nice warm cause under the covers. #editingchat
44 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Yes, everything’s cause & effect, so backstory’s essential. #editingchat
44 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
So Flora needs Charlie. We assume Charlie also loves her, i.e. needs more from her than just her ace savior skills. #editingchat
45 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: Now Shane’s giving her backstory. #editingchat | Necessary to make her choices and desires believeable.
45 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
And you will do that to them. You know you will. It’s your job. #editingchat
46 minutes ago

shanearthur shanearthur
@
@VictoriaMixon Her arranged marriage is to a Brit, and Charlies mortal enemy. #editingchat
46 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Heck, Charlie himself cd interfere! If he ever gives her cause to doubt his love, you know, he’s a goner. #editingchat
46 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Now Shane’s giving her backstory., filling out the fuel for her NEED for Charlie Boy. #editingchat
47 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
RT @VictoriaMixon: Because more things cd interfere #editingchat | Different social classes, different ages.
47 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Lots of things cd interfere. And you will force her to face as many as possible as you tell her story. #editingchat
47 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Because more things cd interfere w/Flora’s need to love Ch besides those pesky Brits. #editingchat
47 minutes ago

shanearthur shanearthur
@
@VictoriaMixon she’s2b married 2 a bum but she’d rather die. She sees alpha male charlie with class & a cause and must hav it. #editingchat
48 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Anything that interferes with that need is automatic BUZZER for Flora. #editingchat
48 minutes ago

megcarpen Megan Carpenter
@
@victoriamixon He’s a prince, right. Maybe he has connections that she needs, weapons, money, etc… #editingchat
48 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
That’s important to get firmly in your sights. #editingchat
49 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
RT @VictoriaMixon: What need would force you to save the life of your beloved? #editingchat \ At the climax, she must save him or he’ll die.
49 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Yes. Flora NEEDS Charlie. Her passion for him drives her. She NEEDS his love & her love for him. #editingchat
49 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
RT @VictoriaMixon: What need would force you to save the life of your beloved? #editingchat | Simply that you love them.
50 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
You’re all thinking too deep. What need would force you to save the life of your beloved? #editingchat
51 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@megcarpen: Could their shared cause also be a deep need? #editingchat | Because it’s life and death, I think it has to be very deep.
51 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Yes, it could. But that’s next. First let’s pin down what Flora NEEDS. Assuming saving Ch from the Brits wasn’t easy #editingchat @megcarpen
51 minutes ago

megcarpen Megan Carpenter
@
@mterrygreen Could their shared cause also be a deep need? #editingchat
53 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Why does Flora need to save Charlie? What’s in it for her? #editingchat
53 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Yes, folks–tell us. What does Flora need that drives her to save Charlie? #editingchat
53 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: Knowing that, and knowing she’s our protag, what does she most need in the world? #editingchat | To save him.
54 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
We’re talking Need #1. #editingchat
54 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon #editingchat Also, just want to make it clear that other writers can jump in here.
54 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Knowing that, and knowing she’s our protag, what does she most need in the world? #editingchat #thisonesagimme
55 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
That makes the catastrophe from which she saves him the Climax. #editingchat
55 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
RT @VictoriaMixon: Okay, so let’s assume her saving him is the story, right? #editingchat | Right.
56 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon #editingchat I’m totally envisioning sequels for the ultimate protagonist babe but I’m less interest in the before.
56 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Okay, so let’s assume her saving him is the story, right? #editingchat
56 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Because you could do any of the three, knowing that event occurred. #editingchat
56 minutes ago

megcarpen Megan Carpenter
@
@mterrygreen #editingchat But we still can play w/ what brought them together, and what took them apart + everything between!
56 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon #editingchat I think it’s the story of during, so yes, how she save him.
57 minutes ago

PJ_Kaiser PJ Kaiser
attn writers: #editingchat with @VictoriaMixon is going on right now
57 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Are you talking about writing the story of how she saved him? Before? After? #editingchat
57 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon #editingchat In a sense, it’s constrained by the facts.
58 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon #editingchat …but must separate in the end.
58 minutes ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: Do you have a story sentence? Or just those 2 facts? #editingchat | They come together against the backdrop of the times…
58 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Not “just” I mean. #editingchat #itwasthetouchpad
59 minutes ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Do you have a story sentence? Or just those 2 facts? #editingchat
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: So already we know Flora’s a babe. #editingchat | She’s the ultimate protagonist babe.
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon #editingchat I think there’s potential in their story, though I’ve never really come up with something I like.
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
So already we know Flora’s a babe. #editingchat
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon #editingchat True life is weirder. She went on to participate in the American Revolution.
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
They fell in love & killed fatted calves?? @mterrygreen #weirdalready #editingchat
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Got it. @mterrygreen Flora & Charlie #editingchat
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
#editingchat Fiction: They may have been together for months. Was there romance? Adventure? Sacrifice? Could there be all three?
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
#editingchat Fact: Flora MacDonald saved the life of Bonnie Prince Charlie as he fled forces sympathetic to the British government, 1746.
1 hour ago

megcarpen Megan Carpenter
Oh my goodness, it’s Thursday, time for #editingchat I swear I didn’t forget!
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
#editingchat I’ve got a historical fiction story based on two actual personages in history, so first a fact.
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Yes. Everyone ready? @mterrygreen’s giving us her sentence for another Developmental Demo today. #editingchat
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon #editingchat The deathstar is ready. Shall I pitch it out there?
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Mind your manners, you, or I’ll turn your deathstar story into Mary Poppins. @mterrygreen Already the excuses #editingchat
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Also this computer has a super-sensitive touchpad, so if I post a tweet that makes no sense it’s b/c I was thinking & whoosh! #editingchat
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon #editingchat Already the excuses.
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
I don’t have a refresh button on my computer this week–I broke my laptop & am on a loaner. So I might be slow on the uptake. #editingchat
1 hour ago

shanearthur shanearthur
#editingchat It’s time for the perculator!
1 hour ago

jefro_net jefro_net
#notaeuphemism may be my new favorite hashtag @VictoriaMixon @mterrygreen @benandthebuses #editingchat
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
#editingchat Present.
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
There goes the chime! Welcome to #editingchat writers. Are you all here?
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
All right, folks. Two-minute countdown. #editingchat #amwriting #writing
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
@VictoriaMixon: My god, what have I created? @Benandthebuses | I am a story sentence nightmare. #editingchat
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Half-hour to #editingchat, guys. Even *I* can count 1/2. #amwriting #writing
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
My god, what have I created? @mterrygreen @Benandthebuses Story sentences everywhere! #editingchat
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
How she hacked into my Twitter account I’ll NEVER know. Must have to do w/her #editingchat story sentence. @mterrygreen Maniacal snicker
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
Maniacal snicker. RT @VictoriaMixon: FORTY minutes to #editingchat Woops! That was @mterrygreen messing with yall.
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
FORTY minutes to #editingchat Woops! That was @mterrygreen messing with yall. #amwriting #writing
1 hour ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Twenty minutes to #editingchat Are you ready? @mterrygreen plans to show no mercy. #amwriting #writing #jellybeansandnachoes
1 hour ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
Fellow writers: Developmental editing demo w/ @VictoriaMixon & awesome evil story sentence. TODAY on #editingchat 12-1pm PST. #writing
2 hours ago

SillyStoryIdeas Walter Dinjos
#editingchat 4/28/11: Once again, my sterling memory rewards me. That and the big ole note I wrote to myself las… http://bit.ly/kUO9HS
2 hours ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Today! #editingchat noon PST https://victoriamixon.com/ Come see @mterrygreen show no mercy #amwriting #writing
2 hours ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
Fellow writers: Developmental editing demo w/ @VictoriaMixon, TODAY, on #editingchat, 12-1pm, PST. #writing #amwriting I’ll show no mercy.
5 hours ago

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
#editingchat w/ @VictoriaMixon Thu 12-1pm PST. The story sentence / is ripe for development. / Hurry, editor. #amwriting #writing #haiku
20 hours ago

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Bring ’em. #editingchat Tomorrow (THURS) noon-1pm PST. @mterrygreen your own deadly confection. | Oddly enough, I have several.
27 Apr

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Will you be at #editingchat? @DuchessAbroad Please tell us about the jellybeans. @mterrygreen @__Deb @jefro_net
26 Apr

__Deb –Deb
@
@VictoriaMixon Which reminds me, I’ve got some sponge cake and strawberries downstairs. #editingchat #writing
26 Apr

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Sadness! I was looking forward to cake. @mterrygreen Death. Oh yes. | Cake or death? | Developmt Demo on #editingchat Thu 12-1 PST #writing
26 Apr

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
Death. Oh yes. RT @VictoriaMixon: Cake or death? @mterrygreen I *will* bring it. | Developmental Demo on #editingchat Thu 12-1 PST #writing
26 Apr

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Cake or death? @mterrygreen I *will* bring it. | Developmental Demo on #editingchat Thu noon-1 PST #amwriting #writing
26 Apr

megcarpen Megan Carpenter
@
@mterrygreen Cant wait!!! #editingchat #amwriting #writing
26 Apr

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
I *will* bring it. RT @VictoriaMixon: She’s thrown down the gauntlet.Developmental Demo on #editingchat Thu noon-1 PST #amwriting #writing
26 Apr

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
Nice. RT @VictoriaMixon: She’s thrown down the gauntlet.Developmental Demo w/@mterrygreen on #editingchat Thu noon-1 PST #amwriting #writing
26 Apr

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
She’s thrown down the gauntlet, guys.Developmental Demo w/@mterrygreen on #editingchat Thurs noon-1 PST #amwriting #writing
26 Apr

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
#editingchat Are we doing another Developmental Demo, people? Or something else? #amwriting #writing
26 Apr

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
You got your dander up & are going to sub yr story sentence, aren’t you? 🙂 @mterrygreen DD was awesome #editingchat
26 Apr

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
DD was awesome. RT @VictoriaMixon: #editingchat Thu 12-1 pm PST. Writer’s block? Or do another Developmental demo? #amwriting #writing
26 Apr

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
#editingchat Thursday noon-1 pm PST. Will we get around to writer’s block this week? Or do another Developmental demo? #amwriting #writing
26 Apr

mterrygreen M. Terry Green
Fellow writers, #editingchat w/ @VictoriaMixon, Thu 12pm-1 PST. Last week was a writing seminar: http://bit.ly/f2IyrP #writing #amwriting
25 Apr

PJ_Kaiser PJ Kaiser
RT @VictoriaMixon: Hey, #editingchat Thursday noon-1pmPST this week! 1pm MST, 2pm CST, 3pm EST, & I believe 8pm GST. #amwriting #writing
25 Apr

VictoriaMixon Victoria Mixon
Hey, #editingchat Thursday noon-1pm this week! 1pm MST, 2pm CST, 3pm EST, & I believe 8pm GST. #amwriting #writing
25 Apr