We’re doing #14 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: When I saw him shot through the head—<br>by Elizabeth Leslie”
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Free HOOK Edit: Bethany is stalking me—
by Lisa Katzenberger
We’re doing #13 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: Bethany is stalking me—<br>by Lisa Katzenberger”
Free HOOK Edit: Red letters flew into John’s vision—
by Andrew Rosenberg
We’re doing #12 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: Red letters flew into John’s vision—<br>by Andrew Rosenberg”
Free HOOK Edit: It’s a story—
by Jo Ann Hernandez
We’re doing #11 in my 1009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: in August 2009 readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: It’s a story—<br>by Jo Ann Hernandez”
Free HOOK Edit: The blood pooling under the man’s back—
by Michelle Davidson Argyle
We’re doing #10 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: The blood pooling under the man’s back—<br>by Michelle Davidson Argyle”
Free HOOK Edit: Carmen slammed her keycard—
by M. Shirey
We’re doing #9 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: Carmen slammed her keycard—<br>by M. Shirey”
Free HOOK Edit: Trapped—
by Richard Young
We’re doing #8 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: Trapped—<br>by Richard Young”
Free HOOK Edit: The filming began last week—
by Amy Henry
We’re doing #7 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: The filming began last week—<br>by Amy Henry”
Free HOOK Edit: Dear Major Bradon—
by Angie Capozello
We’re doing #6 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: Dear Major Bradon—<br>by Angie Capozello”
Free HOOK Edit: To begin with, Marlowe was dead—
by Michael Wright
We’re doing #5 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: To begin with, Marlowe was dead—<br>by Michael Wright”