Category: Editing Services

I finished my 2009 free HOOK Edit series with #22, the hook to which I made the fewest edits. This one is called A lot of people think garbage collectors are idiots, by Jeff Betts. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my Editing Services.) Now I want… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: A lot of people think garbage collectors are idiots—<br>by Jeff Betts”

We’re doing #21 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: Katie had just taken the first bite—<br>by Laura Eno”

We’re doing #20 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: The uninhabited island—<br>by Sean O’Mordha”

We’re doing #19 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: Steam rose from the surface—<br>by Amy Carey”

We’re doing #18 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: I was sent a letter—<br>by Agatha Dellamonde”

We’re doing #17 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: Elizabeth couldn’t decide—<br>by Marina Ferguson”

We’re doing #16 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: Sherman hated this town—<br>by Jeannette Bennett-Farley”

We’re doing #15 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: I was happy—<br>by Lanetta J. Sprott”

We’re doing #14 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: When I saw him shot through the head—<br>by Elizabeth Leslie”

We’re doing #13 in my 2009 series of free HOOK Edit Specials today: readers sent me the first 150 words of their novels, and I did a quick Developmental Edit on each one, followed by a Copy & Line Edit. (You can still find all these Sample Edits under my… Read more“Free HOOK Edit: Bethany is stalking me—<br>by Lisa Katzenberger”